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zodiac on Strength by Dovina 5 Sep 2005, 3:24 AM
The amount you should think he disapproves is, "pretty much, but not to an extent or in a way that necessitates raging." Is it?
Bethy on 9/5 by cronus 5 Sep 2005, 4:46 AM
a diary, what a fantastic way to feel poetry...:) Bethy
Bethy on lunch by ay deee 5 Sep 2005, 5:03 AM
I like this, it is just the kind of stuff you hear at lunch...cool :) Bethy
Bethy on some deleted poem 5 Sep 2005, 5:06 AM
i feel the anger here...good poem, :) Bethy
Bethy on Dale by INTRANSIT 5 Sep 2005, 5:14 AM
good memories...we all have them, this is what I write about, fic and non-fic...still there all good feelings...someone always laughs, it either reminds people of themselves or someone...this one reminds me of my buddy Ed...and he was a nutbar... still is...thanks for the belly giggles...lol :) Bethy
bellafuego on some deleted poem 4 Sep 2005, 12:22 PM
as one ocd'er to another this was a great read. i often find myself saying the title to many of my "normal" friends.
ay deee on Lessons(revised) by bellafuego 4 Sep 2005, 12:26 PM
word to that
bellafuego on Beware of Cruel Poets by Dovina 4 Sep 2005, 12:35 PM
perfect poem for this site
ay deee on some deleted poem 4 Sep 2005, 12:35 PM
i usually just throw those ones out, but now may consider alternate action
bellafuego on some deleted poem 4 Sep 2005, 12:56 PM
perfect!!!
Yeah well there are hardly any Christians where I live, and we haven't been pulped by any McHurricaines. It's like all those Muslim fundamentalists who believe the Tsunami was a message from God telling the Indonesians not to adopt Western customs, but to remain fully scarfed-up. Of course the message would have been rather more potent had the Tsunami struck the shores of California, where Nudity runs wide-rife, and where a Gentleman cannot walk Five Paces without brushing up against a Gay.
bellafuego on The secret press by zodiac 4 Sep 2005, 9:44 AM
thanks for the comment on "Lessons" after reading some of your poems the meaning i was trying to convey wasn't coming across. your work is pretty skilled, very easy to visualize the words.
Dovina on Lessons(revised) by bellafuego 4 Sep 2005, 11:18 AM
2+2=4 no matter how many times you revise it. The last line, and all but the second, make sense.
Dovina on Powerless Dreamer by Beyond_Dreams 4 Sep 2005, 11:33 AM
Smooth "no sunlight had"
bellafuego on some deleted poem 4 Sep 2005, 12:41 PM
a stupid crush now crushed, is a great line...sounds like this was written when the anger was fresh
wow!!! this poem could have been a scene in one of those lifetime tv movies about cheating husbands
Dovina on Untitled by bellafuego 4 Sep 2005, 2:44 PM
Try again when you're sober.
Dovina on some deleted poem 4 Sep 2005, 5:23 PM
How do you build a wall between me? It takes two to have between. You couldn't take your words? How does someone not take their words? Please don't explain to me what you mean. It matters more how you say it.
Bethy on Strength by Dovina 4 Sep 2005, 6:15 PM
get outta my head...lol...*10* :) Bethy
ay deee on Drinking Knowledge by gregsamsa222 4 Sep 2005, 9:19 PM
sculptuing and drawing go very well with tea, but i would agree with the ethics bit