Re: The secret press by zodiac	bellafuego 199.77.249.2	4-Sep-05/9:44 AM
thanks for the comment on "Lessons" after reading some of your poems the meaning i was trying to convey wasn't coming across. your work is pretty skilled, very easy to visualize the words.
Re: Lessons(revised) by bellafuego	Dovina 12.96.171.27	4-Sep-05/11:18 AM
2+2=4 no matter how many times you revise it. The last line, and all but the second, make sense.
Re: Powerless Dreamer by Beyond_Dreams	Dovina 12.96.171.27	4-Sep-05/11:33 AM
Smooth "no sunlight had"
regarding some deleted poem...	bellafuego 199.77.249.2	4-Sep-05/12:22 PM
as one ocd'er to another this was a great read. i often find myself saying the title to many of my "normal" friends.
Re: Lessons(revised) by bellafuego	ay deee 24.255.87.123	4-Sep-05/12:26 PM
word to that
Re: Beware of Cruel Poets by Dovina	bellafuego 199.77.249.2	4-Sep-05/12:35 PM
perfect poem for this site
regarding some deleted poem...	ay deee 24.255.87.123	4-Sep-05/12:35 PM
i usually just throw those ones out, but now may consider alternate action
regarding some deleted poem...	bellafuego 199.77.249.2	4-Sep-05/12:41 PM
a stupid crush now crushed, is a great line...sounds like this was written when the anger was fresh
Re: Secret Dream-Thoughts of a Married Man by Bethy	bellafuego 199.77.249.2	4-Sep-05/12:45 PM
wow!!! this poem could have been a scene in one of those lifetime tv movies about cheating husbands
regarding some deleted poem...	bellafuego 199.77.249.2	4-Sep-05/12:56 PM
perfect!!!
Re: Untitled by bellafuego	Dovina 12.96.171.27	4-Sep-05/2:44 PM
Try again when you're sober.
regarding some deleted poem...	Dovina 12.96.171.2	4-Sep-05/5:23 PM
How do you build a wall between me? It takes two to have between. You couldn't take your words? How does someone not take their words? Please don't explain to me what you mean. It matters more how you say it.
Re: Strength by Dovina	Bethy 24.222.32.218	4-Sep-05/6:15 PM
get outta my head...lol...*10* :) Bethy
Re: Drinking Knowledge by gregsamsa222	ay deee 24.255.87.123	4-Sep-05/9:19 PM
sculptuing and drawing go very well with tea, but i would agree with the ethics bit
Re: Strength by Dovina	zodiac 86.108.9.1	5-Sep-05/3:24 AM
The amount you should think he disapproves is, "pretty much, but not to an extent or in a way that necessitates raging." Is it?
Re: The Absense of God by Bluemonkey	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 81.159.221.190	5-Sep-05/4:26 AM
Yeah well there are hardly any Christians where I live, and we haven't been pulped by any McHurricaines. It's like all those Muslim fundamentalists who believe the Tsunami was a message from God telling the Indonesians not to adopt Western customs, but to remain fully scarfed-up. Of course the message would have been rather more potent had the Tsunami struck the shores of California, where Nudity runs wide-rife, and where a Gentleman cannot walk Five Paces without brushing up against a Gay.
Re: 9/5 by cronus	Bethy 24.222.32.194	5-Sep-05/4:46 AM
a diary, what a fantastic way to feel poetry...:) Bethy
Re: lunch by ay deee	Bethy 24.222.32.194	5-Sep-05/5:03 AM
I like this, it is just the kind of stuff you hear at lunch...cool :) Bethy
regarding some deleted poem...	Bethy 24.222.32.194	5-Sep-05/5:06 AM
i feel the anger here...good poem, :) Bethy
Re: Dale by INTRANSIT	Bethy 24.222.32.194	5-Sep-05/5:14 AM
good memories...we all have them, this is what I write about, fic and non-fic...still there all good feelings...someone always laughs, it either reminds people of themselves or someone...this one reminds me of my buddy Ed...and he was a nutbar... still is...thanks for the belly giggles...lol :) Bethy