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9/5 (Free verse) by cronus too often
i find myself here
visiting
the unlit corners
the unknown spaces
quiet hollows
where something
that i do not desire
threatens
to overtake me
Up the ladder:
You Give Me Love
Down the ladder:
Cold Collapse
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Posted: September 5, 2005 2:18 AM PDT; Last modified: September 5, 2005 2:18 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.0596013 Overall Rank: 6753 Comments:
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Bethy @ 24.222.32.194
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5-Sep-05/4:46 AM
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a diary, what a fantastic way to feel poetry...:) Bethy
Eighth line, get rid of 'That'.
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