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9/5 (Free verse) by cronus

too often i find myself here visiting the unlit corners the unknown spaces quiet hollows where something that i do not desire threatens to overtake me

Tintagiles 7-Sep-05/8:04 PM
Eighth line, get rid of 'That'.




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