Free verse № 125748
The secret press
They have an aging third-world washer,
guava green in a back bathroom,
with two compartments: one a defunct agitator
they call 'Obrero', the other an electric
spin-wringer that works - named 'Tlatelolco',
which after everything's the only thing
left of it worth holding on to.
So - some tropic night, after meetings
after the calls, the chairs grating, the then-hush
meaning the sweatshop tailors under
are riding late buses out to the barrios
and thinking frijoles or Beta's wedding,
they've invented a system: wash, wring,
rinse, wring, rinse, wring. Then hung
on the roof for morning, the city shut
on itself and still - or so - numinous.
It makes him expansive, the order of it,
the way she keeps that old wringer spinning
or pushes a wisp of hair from her face
with a track of soapsuds. This is the revolution,
he's fond of saying, always smoking, his inkstained
hands drawing bubbles through a worn shirt,
each weft of it something breathing. Exploding.
In my village, she thinks, the way my mother
woke us cranking her Forties mangle.
Strong-armed as she was, she made her hands
useless for grasping after. And would
she have held us if she could? Didn't she though?
she asks. Then, after a moment, No,
She wouldn't have recognized herself in this.
In the end, she says, it's all doctrines and doctrines.
Or what's left? A wash, a wet housedress
she pulls up over her navel, her breasts.
In the end it's clothes with clothes under. And she's bent
shivering, bare arms in a tub, till his lips
find the smear left on her shoulder where
she's swatted a mosquito and then forgotten,
and she says, oh the copy table, love, spread
me thin as paper, print me like a banner.
Him: So; how we spin as fast as we can.
Her: How it hangs me in a damp night wind.
11 comments
1) The lines are much shorter than the space available. Sometimes, they're not even the same length. There are paragraph-breaks inserted at odd places.
2) "No" and "though" rhyme. "Agitator" and "Tlatelolco" almost do.
3) It's posted on a poetry website, with "Free Verse" written at the top.
4) People who come to poetry websites to read and vote on poetry are voting on it.
If I was female, I'd be wrung. Metrics all the way.
In my defense, I did mean something by "agitator", "wringer", "mangle" and "banner". That's got to be worth something, considering.
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