| Re: Poetic Blue Justice by Dovina |
Prince of Void 77.237.64.242 |
11-Jan-09/2:37 PM |
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it's not about your poem
it's about you though
oh love... you have no kind of flaw or fault
so then we begin to sing and make love
everything that s excellent
let our hearts just as pure and fair
may beat in as one heart
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A. Nomaly 114.128.40.3 |
12-Jan-09/6:52 AM |
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mmmmmmm, I wanna get dressed in that
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Stephen Robins 62.73.157.126 |
12-Jan-09/7:31 AM |
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This poem couldn't be more wrong if you drove it to an outward bound centre for mentals, laced all the mentals' tea with Rhophnol and then allowed it to practice its flute playing with the mentals' private parts.
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| Re: To Poets Whose Writing is Fecal. by SupremeDreamer |
Stephen Robins 62.73.157.126 |
12-Jan-09/7:34 AM |
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I understand you. You suffered a great loss in your early life and have spent the rest of it trying to replace the loss with a gigantic prosthetic. Unfortunately whilst some may replace a broken penis with a snooker ball in a sock you have chosen a she-pee.
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| Re: To Poets Whose Writing is Fecal. by SupremeDreamer |
dclark 68.209.116.205 |
15-Jan-09/6:19 PM |
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it's just a voice people choose.
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| Re: Taste Ghazni by eliastemplar |
malpaso 70.233.167.164 |
16-Jan-09/5:20 PM |
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loved the part about the berkas and the puddles....enhances the whole theme of timelessness and that kind of subtle power
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| Re: Ever With Me by forsaken |
Sigh'ense... 69.225.133.126 |
17-Jan-09/9:19 PM |
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| Re: If I Had by forsaken |
Sigh'ense... 69.225.133.126 |
17-Jan-09/9:25 PM |
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| Re: The flute sound makes me blue by Prince of Void |
Dovina 75.82.253.189 |
21-Jan-09/3:57 PM |
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blue somber flute, bright bird-like flute. I like baroque flute best. breathy and down - flute. nice
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| Re: The PROJECT by Sigh'ense... |
Dovina 75.82.253.189 |
21-Jan-09/3:59 PM |
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Down where I don't live, but can feel it, nicely done
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| Re: Gladly For Love by sliver |
sliver 209.248.123.229 |
4-Feb-09/10:50 PM |
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I know it's cheesy, but what's so wrong with that verse in particular?
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| Re: To Michelle by ALChemy |
sliver 209.248.123.229 |
4-Feb-09/11:11 PM |
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I am baffled yet again, that's why I saved this to my fav's. Stupendous, genious, a piece of art.
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| Re: You're passionate by EAger to Offend |
Bill Z Bub 99.239.12.102 |
14-Feb-09/5:47 PM |
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Sounds like someone I know.
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| Re: Pink BAlls by EAger to Offend |
Bill Z Bub 99.239.12.102 |
14-Feb-09/5:48 PM |
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I'd settle for two, but knight thee with a 10.
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| Re: in this bus terminal of the future by nentwined |
Bill Z Bub 99.239.12.102 |
14-Feb-09/6:00 PM |
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This place is dead! Or perhaps hibernating?
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| Re: To my Moneta by Bill Z Bub |
Bill Z Bub 99.239.12.102 |
15-Feb-09/10:59 AM |
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This is my St. Valentine's Day poem. Think Hallmark would buy it?
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| Re: Echoes of Eichmann by Caducus |
Bill Z Bub 192.139.153.30 |
15-Feb-09/2:16 PM |
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this one is difficult. I shall rate it with a randomly generated number.
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| Re: The Project by malpaso |
Bill Z Bub 99.239.12.102 |
16-Feb-09/5:09 PM |
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I know a few prefab holes I'd like to stick my trunk into. they say it feels like warm jello pie... but like this poem it always leaves me feeling a bit empty, and wanting more. Here's an 7 for the intrigue.
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| Re: 9 Things to Eat for Breakfast & Why by A. Nomaly |
Bill Z Bub 99.239.12.102 |
16-Feb-09/5:12 PM |
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Is this the new Jenny Craig diet? I find black licorice mixes well with kisses. Nine for 9.
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| Re: To Poets Whose Writing is Fecal. by SupremeDreamer |
Bill Z Bub 99.239.12.102 |
16-Feb-09/5:26 PM |
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Because this reminds me of the old days, ten!
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