Re: 9 Things to Eat for Breakfast & Why by A. Nomaly	jessicazee 67.53.0.108	17-Feb-09/10:53 PM
awesome
Re: The Project by malpaso	malpaso 70.233.138.77	24-Feb-09/9:27 AM
'always'? you mean like everytime you read it? how sweet!!!!
Re: The death of Carlos Huarrez by Caducus	malpaso 70.233.138.77	25-Feb-09/9:35 AM
Ah,First World meets Third World....by chance? Excellent work!!
Re: brain cookies by nentwined	Blindpoetry 68.226.178.153	26-Feb-09/9:43 PM
i lol'd
Re: panpragmalogoethospathos by malpaso	nentwined 75.83.196.201	27-Feb-09/5:52 AM
interesting. there's chunks and cake and nugget here. but kind of disheartening to pick them out of the puke. refine?
Re: My love is drowning in PCP by T. Jonathron Remp	nentwined 75.83.196.201	27-Feb-09/5:53 AM
I like "shine spasm". The rest doesn't work so much for me.
Re: no title by Dovina	nentwined 75.83.196.201	27-Feb-09/5:54 AM
:heh: I had some trouble with the transition from 1 to 2; and 3 felt somewhat cheap.
Re: Bacchus and the Ivy by <{Baba^Yaga}>	nentwined 75.83.196.201	27-Feb-09/5:56 AM
"and why it might"? Has a good lyric sense to it, but it feels like too much nonsense, too. A touch of bob dylan, a touch of the beatles, and other things I recognize but can't name--but I think more it winds up just "touched". Then again, 6am, I might be reading too much or too little... In the end, I enjoyed it, and that's always a plus.
Re: Healing by hobojo	nentwined 75.83.196.201	27-Feb-09/5:56 AM
meh
Re: Prelude to Infidelity (edited) by Caducus	nentwined 75.83.196.201	27-Feb-09/5:57 AM
just doesn't work for me; awkward from line to line, s to s. weird, overall, and I like that, but ... eh.
Re: Spuna Vs. Turkeef by <{Baba^Yaga}>	nentwined 75.83.196.201	27-Feb-09/5:58 AM
wtf? :) funny. you got funny.
Re: One More, Then We Go by jessicazee	nentwined 75.83.196.201	27-Feb-09/5:58 AM
doesn't cohere for me
Re: To my Moneta by Bill Z Bub	nentwined 75.83.196.201	27-Feb-09/5:59 AM
awww. thasso sweet! :)
Re: Graveyard(Cry of the Dead) by alvinb	nentwined 75.83.196.201	27-Feb-09/5:59 AM
no. no, no, no. no. This is the poetry you have to write and you also have to show nobody ever. well, except us, because we like to yell.
Re: the rugby cheer by malpaso	nentwined 75.83.196.201	27-Feb-09/6:00 AM
eh.
Re: Pill-Popper's Confessional by Sasha	Bill Z Bub 99.239.12.102	28-Feb-09/11:09 AM
Last line is aces. A++++++++++ would read again,
Re: 9 Things to Eat for Breakfast & Why by A. Nomaly	Bill Z Bub 99.239.12.102	28-Feb-09/11:12 AM
I was just thinking though, what mixes even better with kisses, is Absinthe and tears and when your breath freezes in the air and hangs off your loves hair like icicles shining in the light of passing taxicabs.
Re: for the slaves and the seekers by Bill Z Bub	Blindpoetry 68.226.178.153	1-Mar-09/11:13 PM
lol
Re: for the slaves and the seekers by Bill Z Bub	Bill Z Bub 192.139.153.30	2-Mar-09/8:40 AM
Glad my delightful tragicomical farce amused you, Blindpoetry. Now, who's up for some flogging?
Re: Ode to the Potato by jessicazee	Bill Z Bub 99.239.12.102	3-Mar-09/5:12 AM
The second stanza is fantastic, "so hopeful the morning of bacon"... indeed it is, indeed it is.