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One More, Then We Go (Free verse) by jessicazee
On this round table
one knight in a bottle battles,
bereft of shield, sword,
his armor a sticky paper label,
peeled long-toiled by pointed nails.
He stands still, wobbles halted
by matchbook shims, a postcard folded thrice.
"A dead soldier?" asks the drumline,
the bespectacled overseer, a grim
and thoughtful reaper of emptiness,
a dumper of ashtrays.
"Alive, but not well," the response,
soon a cold naive amateur takes
a happy place in the fold, a body is removed,
recycled with ambered brothers breaking
in a blue plastic bin.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 8136
Posted: February 17, 2009 10:52 PM PST; Last modified: February 17, 2009 10:52 PM PST
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