| Re: Of Bobjims (An actual poem this time!?!) by Bobjim |
OMOMOMOM 86.142.241.74 |
18-Dec-08/7:12 AM |
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i liked it but i thought that bit just didnt fit in u should have just kept gay:(Well, actually paedophilic but it wouldn't sound right in this
poem, never mind, it's near enough.),but still good
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| Re: The toilet by The Eskimo King |
OMOMOMOM 86.142.241.74 |
18-Dec-08/7:15 AM |
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| Re: The Toilet Paper Tumbles by PsydewaysTears |
OMOMOMOM 86.142.241.74 |
18-Dec-08/7:18 AM |
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| Re: Poop! by dougsoderstrom |
OMOMOMOM 86.142.241.74 |
18-Dec-08/7:20 AM |
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| Re: beauty by Adriaan |
Spirit52 86.138.133.59 |
20-Dec-08/1:46 PM |
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Vivid images here....excellent!
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malpaso 70.233.158.39 |
24-Dec-08/5:29 PM |
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that's the Holocaust for ya. This poem is excellent!!!
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INTRANSIT 69.23.211.222 |
26-Dec-08/7:55 PM |
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Dan ! You goofball.
S-1 lose the hardware. keep the prize, the psyche, the phil.
S-2 merge those last two lines
drop the h/h
"hate for the sake of gods..." aint it the truth.
for all intents and p/r purposes......
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Dan garcia-Black 69.237.76.64 |
26-Dec-08/10:43 PM |
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Thanks for the read and the critique, In.
You are spot on!
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| Re: Horus, Thy Eye. by SupremeDreamer |
INTRANSIT 69.23.211.222 |
28-Dec-08/4:47 PM |
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| Re: 2012 - The Haiku Remix. by DreamerSupreme |
INTRANSIT 69.23.211.222 |
28-Dec-08/4:48 PM |
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wouldn't have to wait if someone would just push the damn thing.
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DreamerSupreme 75.30.177.249 |
2-Jan-09/7:56 AM |
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It ain't concepts of paradise that fuck it all up--
It's the gods and the different ways of observing them, and the monopoly each one claims to have on their variant forms of paradise, that make it so hellish on earth that one is stressed into religion-- seeking prescribed forms of paradise lost.
We gave this deity form... why don't we fucking kill him/her/it already and skip to the paradise part of it all?
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| Re: To Poets Whose Writing is Fecal. by SupremeDreamer |
INTRANSIT 69.23.211.222 |
2-Jan-09/7:33 PM |
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| Re: Poetic Blue Justice by Dovina |
Prince of Void 77.237.66.141 |
3-Jan-09/9:09 AM |
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The beauty of your poem is that it's beautifully simple and It's just great
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| Re: To Poets Whose Writing is Fecal. by SupremeDreamer |
Prince of Void 77.237.67.85 |
3-Jan-09/1:57 PM |
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to poets who has ignored the concept of beauty
is something we define and re-define
we just get things worse by ignoring the beauties that we are the fathers of ...
we're here in the same wasteland of poetry
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| Re: To Poets Whose Writing is Fecal. by SupremeDreamer |
Dovina 208.127.228.52 |
5-Jan-09/5:07 PM |
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I write bad poetry and procrastinate my death. Yawn.
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| Re: the invisible beauty by Prince of Void |
Dovina 208.127.228.52 |
5-Jan-09/5:14 PM |
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Thank you, I take it personally behind my fake face, for there I am beautiful
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| Re: Back to reality by Prince of Void |
Dovina 208.127.228.52 |
5-Jan-09/5:17 PM |
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Swimming to the end of the ocean is a great way to go. Like riding a bicycle day after day until . . .
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| Re: Snorting the Cosmic Dust. by DreamerSupreme |
Dovina 208.127.228.52 |
5-Jan-09/5:27 PM |
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Like it even though it preaches like the preacher it condemns.
âJesus saw redemption . . . suicide or the cleansing of sinâ interesting line
âKeep thy eyes forwardâ Thatâs âthineâ but mixing vintage is a sin
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| Re: Gladly For Love by sliver |
Dovina 208.127.228.52 |
5-Jan-09/5:51 PM |
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I figured it a love letter to someone you know and was about to suggest handwriting and sending, until the last verse.
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| Re: The Politics of Poetry.coms by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
malpaso 70.233.151.75 |
8-Jan-09/4:23 PM |
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at least you're not bitter!
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