Re: Even the elephants by ecargo	Ranger 62.252.32.15	13-Mar-06/7:40 AM
Vivid! Very few poems actually take me to the scene; this one is an exception. Once again I think your word choice is impeccable...no fault with this one whatsoever. Stanza 3 was great and stanza 4 was even better!
Re: i want to know how the japanese type by hendrimike	Ranger 62.252.32.15	13-Mar-06/7:43 AM
Brief, simple and fairly effective. The title was the best part though.
Re: Send The Devil... by horus8	Ranger 62.252.32.15	13-Mar-06/7:53 AM
Awesome. Stanzas 2, 3 and 4 rocked my world, as did the final two lines. It's been too long since I last read your stuff.
Re: Desolation by Beyond_Dreams	Dovina 67.72.98.83	13-Mar-06/7:58 AM
Could do without so many uses of "my."
Re: Numbers In Heaven by Dovina	Ranger 62.252.32.15	13-Mar-06/7:58 AM
With the exception of 'unmatched and unmatchable' this made me think of The Island. Which, although I was sceptical, wasn't a terrible film. 'Called, with affection, odd' Marvellous. 9
Re: Boundaries by Dhanesh M Kumar	Dovina 67.72.98.83	13-Mar-06/8:01 AM
I don't get the first verse. The second verse picks up some catchy phrases and rhythm. Only the last two lines geve some clue on what you might be saying.
Re: to a girl from msn by francis nor capule	Ranger 62.252.32.15	13-Mar-06/8:04 AM
Pretty cool, the title makes it sound as though she's from halfway across the world. Do you know her in reality, or just over the net?
Re: We Do Not Write About by faithmairee	Dovina 67.72.98.83	13-Mar-06/8:10 AM
I think it would be stronger using "I" instead of "we." Some people do write of what they don't know. To say that you do not, is really the only thing you can say.
regarding some deleted poem...	Ranger 62.252.32.15	13-Mar-06/8:12 AM
Awesome concept - and realised muchos smoothly! More than 8
Re: The Devil's Carnival by Ranger	Dovina 67.72.98.83	13-Mar-06/8:19 AM
Well done with a difficult form. It's not entirely fair to point out story glitches in a vil, but indulge me. The girl begins crying, destraught. Then, in verse 3, she is merry. From there on, it flows well.
Re: Desolation by Beyond_Dreams	Fayt 141.157.35.222	13-Mar-06/8:23 AM
I like it alot and the cliches dont bother me. This is probably because i can relate personally to the poem. good work.
Re: Spoken word (draft) by Adriaan	Fayt 141.157.35.222	13-Mar-06/8:30 AM
awkward piece, i dont think it comes together yet, but then again it is not complete; 6 for now, but im looking forward to more.
Re: Boundaries by Dhanesh M Kumar	Fayt 141.157.35.222	13-Mar-06/8:36 AM
much better when you know what the theme is.
Re: Hurtin' Once Again by faithmairee	Fayt 141.157.35.222	13-Mar-06/8:38 AM
i agree completely with Ranger.
Re: Emo Kid by Fayt	zodiac 206.174.124.170	13-Mar-06/8:57 AM
Not a limerick or funny. Please stop reposting this.
Re: Numbers In Heaven by Dovina	zodiac 206.174.124.170	13-Mar-06/9:01 AM
You're doing it again and you know it. And you know I know it. There is nothing eternal about 183. Nor is there any point thinking so. In short, you fail in the most eternal possible respect.
Re: Desolation by Beyond_Dreams	zodiac 206.174.124.170	13-Mar-06/9:02 AM
You don't seem to have ever read actual poetry.
Re: i realize by http://robynhood	zodiac 206.174.124.170	13-Mar-06/9:06 AM
Invest in education. It makes relationships so much less blurry.
Re: We Do Not Write About by faithmairee	zodiac 206.174.124.170	13-Mar-06/9:07 AM
Stop writing about what you don't know. Or do. I don't care.
Re: We Do Not Write About by faithmairee	ALChemy 24.74.100.11	13-Mar-06/9:15 AM
I don't know what the square root of infinity is, My guess is 183. There, I just wrote about something I don't know. See we do write about what we don't know. So now you know and knowing is half the battle, YOOOOO Joe!