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Limerick № 140509

Emo Kid

by Fayt

Member since 2004 · Posted 10 Mar 2006 · Edited 13 Mar 2006 · 11 comments

Note: This was written as a joke to a friend who found it quite funny. :P Emo kid don't cry, Don't slit your wrists and die, I'll knit you a sweater, Ad things will get better, They will if only you try.

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11 comments

[8] Ranger 10-Mar-06/10:52 AM Reply
Ha!
You need to change it to:
"I'll knit you a sweater
And things will get better"
In order for it to genuinely be a limerick.

I heard from a friend that someone he knows got beaten up by a gang of about 17 emo kids...unbelievable isn't it? I can only assume they managed to depress him half to death...
[n/a] ecargo › Ranger 10-Mar-06/7:58 PM Reply
Now, that'd make a good poem.
[n/a] Fayt › Ranger 13-Mar-06/8:19 AM Reply
lol!!!

anyway, you are right.

that was a mistake in the typing on my part. Ill change it now.

New vote pls. =D
[8] Ranger › Fayt 13-Mar-06/8:34 AM Reply
Done. 8 as it made me laugh. And maybe, just maybe, one day I will write a tribute to the emo scene.
[n/a] Fayt › Ranger 13-Mar-06/10:19 AM Reply
lol

im looking forward to it. =D
[n/a] Fayt › Fayt 13-Mar-06/10:20 AM Reply
gah, just noticed it says ad... >_> i dont want to change it again. >_<
[n/a] Fayt › Fayt 13-Mar-06/10:20 AM Reply
just realised it says ad, not and. >_< i dont feel like changing it again.
[7] Blue Magpie 11-Mar-06/12:01 AM Reply
It works.
[7] zodiac 13-Mar-06/8:57 AM Reply
Not a limerick or funny. Please stop reposting this.
[n/a] Fayt › zodiac 13-Mar-06/10:19 AM Reply
it was not reposted, and most ppl find it funny.

its called an edit.
[7] amanda_dcosta 7-Apr-06/10:07 AM Reply
Hmmm... not bad. has a bit of a humor tone to it. As for a limmerick format, sorry I can't comment on that. I'm a stranger to limmerick forms and rules.

Keep writing.