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Emo Kid (Limerick) by Fayt Note: This was written as a joke to a friend who found it quite funny.
:P
Emo kid don't cry,
Don't slit your wrists and die,
I'll knit you a sweater,
Ad things will get better,
They will if only you try.
Up the ladder:
Beauty Sleep
Down the ladder:
Origins
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Posted: March 10, 2006 10:23 AM PST; Last modified: March 13, 2006 8:17 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.192101 Overall Rank: 4648 Comments:
It works.
Not a limerick or funny. Please stop reposting this.
it was not reposted, and most ppl find it funny.
its called an edit.
Hmmm... not bad. has a bit of a humor tone to it. As for a limmerick format, sorry I can't comment on that. I'm a stranger to limmerick forms and rules.
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You need to change it to:
"I'll knit you a sweater
And things will get better"
In order for it to genuinely be a limerick.
I heard from a friend that someone he knows got beaten up by a gang of about 17 emo kids...unbelievable isn't it? I can only assume they managed to depress him half to death...
anyway, you are right.
that was a mistake in the typing on my part. Ill change it now.
New vote pls. =D
im looking forward to it. =D