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to a girl from msn (Free verse) by francis nor capule
i miss the way i wait everyday for you each morning i miss the way you send me mail though long, or fleeting i miss the way i used to ask you out the way you always say no i miss the way i persevere till finally you'd say yes, moreso i miss the way you make me glad a reason enough to be living i miss the way you make me sad that leads to disbelieving i wish that that i would be the one you'd miss and kiss goodnight but that thought is wishful thinking and probably you're right so i write this prose and a bloody rose probably , a last effort and plead , and come to you, the one who holds my heart.... -may 15 , midnight-

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.2689414
Overall Rank: 3841
Posted: May 15, 2004 10:49 PM PDT; Last modified: May 15, 2004 10:49 PM PDT
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[7] titan69 @ | 16-May-04/12:48 AM | Reply
I know just how you feel!
[7] Ranger @ | 13-Mar-06/8:04 AM | Reply
Pretty cool, the title makes it sound as though she's from halfway across the world. Do you know her in reality, or just over the net?
[n/a] francis nor capule @ > Ranger | 24-May-06/1:15 AM | Reply
That's the mystery.But let me drop you a hint, no I don't think she's from halfway across the world.
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