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Jill Stockinger on Weened by Jeremi B. Handrinos 22 Dec 2020, 4:32 PM
Some good lines, a TON of anger...
Jill Stockinger on Devilution by Jeremi B. Handrinos 22 Dec 2020, 4:33 PM
Cutesy. Villanelles are not easy...
Jill Stockinger on Beah Richards by Jeremi B. Handrinos 22 Dec 2020, 4:34 PM
Lovely
Jill Stockinger on Horror Film by Jeremi B. Handrinos 22 Dec 2020, 4:35 PM
Well written, sadness staining every line...
Jill Stockinger on Prepropositioned pudding by Jeremi B. Handrinos 22 Dec 2020, 4:35 PM
Very cute!
Jill Stockinger on A FERAL PHASE FOR THE POET by daggatolar 22 Dec 2020, 4:39 PM
The word I think is perpetuity, not perpetuality-- if trying to coin a new word, unnecessary, annoying- some good lines-
Jill Stockinger on Rock of the Earth by ingwa 22 Dec 2020, 4:46 PM
Some good lines, I like the idea captured. No comma after "Hunts gone by" I think- some clunky lines: "experiences, good and bad"- some very good lines: "sing to my soul of ages gone by" and "Ageless you stand, tall and proud/ Lichen grows upon your surfaces"; uneven rhyme scheme does not help (1st and 4th lines in first stanza, 3rd and 4th lines in 3rd stanza, no rhyme in last stanza.
Jill Stockinger on Rock of the Earth by ingwa 22 Dec 2020, 4:46 PM
Some good lines, I like the idea captured. No comma after "Hunts gone by" I think- some clunky lines: "experiences, good and bad"- some very good lines: "sing to my soul of ages gone by" and "Ageless you stand, tall and proud/ Lichen grows upon your surfaces"; uneven rhyme scheme does not help (1st and 4th lines in first stanza, 3rd and 4th lines in 3rd stanza, no rhyme in last stanza.
Jill Stockinger on Ghost by Jeremi B. Handrinos 22 Dec 2020, 4:50 PM
Some beautiful lines, good ending, like how you carry the idea throughout the poem, the speaker believing the person who killed herself is so much better than he is, right to a very bitter end.....
Jill Stockinger on Days of Silence (197-392) by impert&ent 22 Dec 2020, 4:58 PM
Reads like headlines but it gripped me all the way through. Love how "Tom" lines and "Mary" are interspersed here and there. You would not think such a poem would work but I think it does! Enjoyed this! Remembered reading some of these...it engaged my thought, had some humor, did make me think! Enjoyable.
Jill Stockinger on A "sirius"makeover by The_Third_Isis 22 Dec 2020, 5:00 PM
Annoyed by so many misspellings. If they were deliberate, they were not useful. Some interesting ideas, imagery
Jill Stockinger on There was . . . by baphomet 22 Dec 2020, 5:05 PM
(stampede of cattle, not stamped of cattle) Cannot conceive of how a wave "suede"s- swayed? What? Oversized- one word- aftertaste, one word. Do your proofreading before submitting. " a cornucopia" not an cornucopia. "What we'll do tomorrow? Not "What will do". Too many errors detracted from enjoying the poem.
Jill Stockinger on Arm 'n' headin (Mr.Mexicacco) by suprembeaner 22 Dec 2020, 5:06 PM
Annoying
Jill Stockinger on The benefit of being realistic by Jeremi B. Handrinos 22 Dec 2020, 5:07 PM
Compact, good!
Jill Stockinger on Sold by Jeremi B. Handrinos 22 Dec 2020, 5:08 PM
I found this uninspired
Jill Stockinger on you turned me evil by baphomet 22 Dec 2020, 5:09 PM
Not bad!
Jill Stockinger on Queen Of The Ring by baphomet 22 Dec 2020, 5:25 PM
Annoying you are using Hsiwej = Jewish backwards Also, so many spelling errors get annoying to read
Jill Stockinger on Why You All Suck by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? 22 Dec 2020, 5:57 PM
made me laugh!
Jill Stockinger on Spit Factor by [mojo] 22 Dec 2020, 5:59 PM
Humorous! Like your last line!
Jill Stockinger on Little Miss Ogyny by [mojo] 22 Dec 2020, 6:01 PM
Clever!