Awesome job! 10.

Didn't read all of it but it was a good start.

I have a question. What the fuck?

What's the contraction for "Ain't" Ainot? That's what I like about you. You're a loose canon. And personaly? Incest rocks.

Congratulations! This is an utterly unreadable failure of poorly connected words, but I'm sure you think it's the best thing you've ever thought up. Good for you. What ever helps you sleep at night.

Not totally hopeless.

this makes me uncomfortable duh

I am not distastfully displeased I just love zeros but no I want a 5.....

too long ...good too long... good ...too long I don't get it either

I semi-like it..... but you ripped my truths.... and your.... unknown truths............ an asshole

yes!!! yes!!!!!! yes!!!!!! I love this shit! :)

damn.

Hrmm.. the matrix research project? PK's AI would require a bottle of rum, three joints, the mobile meth stash, a copy of this piece, since its fucking funny- the conversation will definately require spicing of this sort. 10!

well shit, i think im getting to really like these haikus, nice work. 9

Ah, so, if this narrator happens to be you, (as with an earlier, seemingly related poem) I guess you broke down and fooled around in spite of your earlier (narrator's) belief that it could never happen. Sometimes, I think the potential for affairs to happen get fed by our frivolous attention to them in poetry- I mean, there's nothing like a poem to convince you that cheating is the right thing to do. Did you really think that after you wrote that other poem that you'd be able to resist? If you really don't want to go through with the cheating, I suggest that you tell your real partner, and have a laugh about the other person (the one who tempts you) and be done with it. Then if you start getting tempted to cheat, your partner will be aware of it and it will be harder to be sneaky. Not that you asked...

Frankly, i hate insects.. for no reason either, but i respect some, untill they get near me and drive me to conduct a murder of bugs. I should do some self therapy perhaps, and find out why they bother me.. maybe one crawled near my diaper as a kid, or whatever. ok, onto the subject at hand: This needs to be edited a bit.. looks rough to me. 6 for now, toodles.

Pretty good, I liked all of the images you stuffed in there. The capitalization at the beginning of each line is a little distracting, however (did you just write it on word and the computer "helped" by capitalizing it all for you?). Fight it!

Bill Gates for Emperor of Chile!.......?

Shitball fights are fun, -but snow doesnt smell!- yes, and theres no color either, how dull damnit.

herd is right, you heard right, right, they herd, right is heard. Nice little play on how the more visible debate obscures the real, massive scale issues.