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What The Hell?! Oh, It's You... (Haiku) by Yatasuma Oh, I'm so sorry
I didn't know you were dead
I'll be more gentle
Up the ladder:
It
Down the ladder:
A Civil Saving Strain
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Posted: October 25, 2003 9:27 AM PDT; Last modified: October 25, 2003 9:27 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.2384057 Overall Rank: 4033 Comments:
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horus8 @ 24.126.116.54
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27-Oct-03/3:52 PM
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Not totally hopeless.
a well conveyed [senryu]; a simple sentiment.
gave me a smile. 177 view(s)
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