poemranker ::What The Hell?! Oh, It's You... by Yatasuma

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Haiku № 72068

What The Hell?! Oh, It's You...

Member since 2003 · Posted 25 Oct 2003 · 2 comments

Oh, I'm so sorry I didn't know you were dead I'll be more gentle

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2 comments

[7] horus8 27-Oct-03/3:52 PM Reply
Not totally hopeless.
[8] Shuushin 27-Oct-03/6:08 PM Reply
a well conveyed [senryu]; a simple sentiment.

gave me a smile.