Replying to a comment on:

What The Hell?! Oh, It's You... (Haiku) by Yatasuma

Oh, I'm so sorry I didn't know you were dead I'll be more gentle

Shuushin 27-Oct-03/6:08 PM
a well conveyed [senryu]; a simple sentiment.

gave me a smile.




Track and Plan your submissions ; Read some Comics ; Get Paid for your Poetry
PoemRanker Copyright © 2001 - 2024 - kaolin fire - All Rights Reserved
All poems Copyright © their respective authors
An internet tradition since June 9, 2001