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some say somewhat truth (Free verse) by earthwaterair
A beacon of light permiates through the darkness. Indifference in this existance I see through and harness. Uncomprehendable to evil the speed at which God works. Something in the kingdom that cannot be observed. The good book with guidelines to religion. Guardian angels unseen with free wisdom. Love remains so the breathren listened. to the sound of Heaven's trumpets at long last glistened. In time those obtaining righteousness can bask. In streams of power and glory prevail steadfast. Instead of seeing life as a repetitive cycle of death after strife. Just a time to be born and to die? Sadly war not peace on the rise. But then why point out iniquities seen with thine eyes? A personal relationship with the Lord shall suffice. Everything has reasons behind it like compassion. In disbelief some say why did this happen? But in grief let us pray for wicked actions. foresake vengence Don't say they'll pay at long last. Then gifts of the spirit fresh and new again. I'll never have a single doubt of his rewards. When as of yet no one says my perception is an art form. In what I know of besides facades on course. Only Jesus Christ had a supernatural heart. Accomidating his lessons from the start. REYWAS NIAD I'll still be proud of what the Lord gave me. Even for just the few now that have known of this poem. Maybe if you'd like to vote in some positive way for me... that's fine then it's my season. I'll still pray for others that just whine for no reason. *please do seek your truth if possible. find - One Love

Up the ladder: Curtains
Down the ladder: tumbleweed

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.5
Weighted score: 5.0596013
Overall Rank: 6757
Posted: October 27, 2003 9:42 AM PST; Last modified: October 27, 2003 9:42 AM PST
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[n/a] horus8 @ 24.126.116.54 | 27-Oct-03/3:50 PM | Reply
Congratulations! This is an utterly unreadable failure of poorly connected words, but I'm sure you think it's the best thing you've ever thought up. Good for you. What ever helps you sleep at night.
[n/a] sliver @ 63.189.17.109 | 27-Oct-03/6:33 PM | Reply
I liked it. It speaks from the heart. May the Sacred Heart of Jesus have mercy on us.
[n/a] earthwaterair @ 144.96.120.166 > sliver | 27-Oct-03/7:09 PM | Reply
thanks sliver :)
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