Help | About | Suggestions | Alms | Chat [0] | Users [0] | Log In | Join
 Search:
Poem: Submit | Random | Best | Worst | Recent | Comments   

The Secret Jungle Keys (Free verse) by Y2kSlamPoet
Banana cream pie; no one should wonder why my crew is named the talking monkeys. Feces and green vines; another day in the jungle, last nights moon cry already forgotten. Its better than being man who has fallen with just an apple. We monkeys prefer mangos. Fleas try to escape the grimy finger nails of my tree mate, and he shall feast every day as long as he sticks with me. Strange it is, putting dinner on the table just letting nature take its course. My blood be holy; monkey fur be the temple for the lord of the fleas. They drink to their health and my tree mates stomach never goes empty. Feces will always be around so that we can give humans the monkey shitface. Mangos and apples, fleas and blood; its the holy jungle, I'm up in the trees mans down below- he can talk and walk and we can swing. Its good to be a monkey. Always lucky when you got the secret jungle keys, and of course- fur full'o'fleas.

Up the ladder: Birthday of a dead guy
Down the ladder: Summer of Firsts

You must be logged in to leave comments. Vote:

Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
 GraphVotes
10  .. 10
.. 00
.. 10
.. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 01
.. 10

Arithmetic Mean: 4.75
Weighted score: 4.970199
Overall Rank: 8472
Posted: October 27, 2003 4:45 PM PST; Last modified: October 27, 2003 4:45 PM PST
View voting details
Comments:
[n/a] Y2kSlamPoet @ 204.31.178.125 | 27-Oct-03/4:46 PM | Reply
Shitball fights are fun,

-but snow doesnt smell!-

yes, and theres no color either, how dull damnit.
[8] http://mulberryfairy @ 216.195.145.111 | 27-Oct-03/4:50 PM | Reply
I think you made the metaphor a little too obvious- but it was, nevertheless, a good one. Make people think a little harder for it.
[n/a] Y2kSlamPoet @ 204.31.178.125 > http://mulberryfairy | 27-Oct-03/4:53 PM | Reply
no worries, i have remixes already planned- but you know some folks hate when i get all cryptic and shit, so i decided to go a lil easy this time.
358 view(s)




Track and Plan your submissions ; Read some Comics ; Get Paid for your Poetry
PoemRanker Copyright © 2001 - 2024 - kaolin fire - All Rights Reserved
All poems Copyright © their respective authors
An internet tradition since June 9, 2001