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regret (Free verse) by FreeFormFixation
we dug our sorry burrows
in the face of apiration.
and drug our children through the
faceless depths of integration.
how i long to kick
one chuck-sole of dust in the eyes
of my former fling,
to blind her and lead
my faceless children past the path
she was fingering.
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.75
Weighted score: 4.970199
Overall Rank: 8433
Posted: January 13, 2006 2:51 AM PST; Last modified: January 13, 2006 2:51 AM PST
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