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regret (Free verse) by FreeFormFixation
we dug our sorry burrows in the face of apiration. and drug our children through the faceless depths of integration. how i long to kick one chuck-sole of dust in the eyes of my former fling, to blind her and lead my faceless children past the path she was fingering.

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.75
Weighted score: 4.970199
Overall Rank: 8486
Posted: January 13, 2006 2:51 AM PST; Last modified: January 13, 2006 2:51 AM PST
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[n/a] FreeFormFixation @ 70.225.165.248 | 13-Jan-06/3:15 AM | Reply
read this in a hurried manner.
[8] zodiac @ 209.193.14.154 | 17-Jan-06/10:43 AM | Reply
"Integration" and your children makes this about schools' racial integration. The rest makes it about not letting go of the '20s.

I know what you're saying. "Integration" is what needs to go.
[8] ALChemy @ 24.74.101.159 | 17-Jan-06/11:19 AM | Reply
I get mixed race children out of it. It's nice whether it's read slow or fast.

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