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on it's all quite obviously one big joke by somemorepoetry
22 Dec 2003, 12:32 AM
Firm.
He probably has a hemoroid named uranus.
me too.
Brilliant
You've been staring at the glaciers for to long buddy. So here's a 10! Merry Christmas
Ms. Calvetti must be flattered.
Is this a poeme about the hustle and bustle of our hectic modern lifestyles?
Did you deliberately write "sings" instead of "signs" and "sing" instead of "sign"? If it wasn't deliberate, I'd say there's a 93.51% chance that you are dyslexic. Am I right?
At some point in your life, you decided to write a poeme about God smoking, and about stars looking like ashes. Why?
It's difficult to feel any sympathy for the elderly when just last week an old man wandered into a playground full of children and chewed their cheeks off.
You can't legislate desire; it has to come from within. Having said that, your use of "glee" to rhyme with "see" and "love" to rhyme with "above" is quite possibly the most staggeringly important contribution to English literature since J.R.Hartley's discovery of the letter "p".
I think it's fascinating that people wear metaphorical masks to hide their less sophisticated character traits from society. On the outside, I'm a committed Christian and passionate racist. But on the inside, I'm a trenchant buffoon who likes running into cake shops and pulling down his trousers. Masks are important, aren't they?
Masks can be very important sometimes, but you must be able to remove them, or they will become a part of you.
Keep submitting!
Perhaps because we need more than ourselves to feel alive. I enjoy that zoo (within reason)
YES! That is how I feel reading Shelley and Wordsworth,and so many others, looking for those velvet words to caress my mind and soul as my own vacant words could never begin to do. Well done nice sentiment. A well deserved 10!
Buy some bright paint, Live a little.