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You Give Me Love (Free verse) by Free2Rhyme15 You brighten up a dull day,when ever it starts,
Your smile alone, just melts my broken heart,
You are a jewel in the crown, a beauty for all to see,
You always have loved me, and always have filled my heart with glee,
The brightest star shinning, in the sky above
Is nothing to you the person who gives me love.
Up the ladder:
the universe is throbbing
Down the ladder:
9/5
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 5.5
Posted: December 21, 2003 8:54 AM PST; Last modified: December 21, 2003 8:54 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.0596013 Overall Rank: 6752 Comments:
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horus8 @ 24.126.116.54
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21-Dec-03/9:01 PM
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Bert.
You can't legislate desire; it has to come from within. Having said that, your use of "glee" to rhyme with "see" and "love" to rhyme with "above" is quite possibly the most staggeringly important contribution to English literature since J.R.Hartley's discovery of the letter "p".
'you can't legislate desire'??????.
Thats what the africans say and it was a really good idea for them!!!
and how she gives love!
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