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You Give Me Love

Member since 2003 · Posted 21 Dec 2003 · 4 comments

You brighten up a dull day,when ever it starts, Your smile alone, just melts my broken heart, You are a jewel in the crown, a beauty for all to see, You always have loved me, and always have filled my heart with glee, The brightest star shinning, in the sky above Is nothing to you the person who gives me love.

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[7] horus8 21-Dec-03/9:01 PM Reply

Bert.

[10] Everyone 22-Dec-03/3:53 PM Reply

You can't legislate desire; it has to come from within. Having said that, your use of "glee" to rhyme with "see" and "love" to rhyme with "above" is quite possibly the most staggeringly important contribution to English literature since J.R.Hartley's discovery of the letter "p".

[n/a] richa › Everyone 23-Dec-03/8:19 AM Reply

'you can't legislate desire'??????.

Thats what the africans say and it was a really good idea for them!!!

[n/a] richa 23-Dec-03/8:18 AM Reply

and how she gives love!