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You Give Me Love (Free verse) by Free2Rhyme15

You brighten up a dull day,when ever it starts, Your smile alone, just melts my broken heart, You are a jewel in the crown, a beauty for all to see, You always have loved me, and always have filled my heart with glee, The brightest star shinning, in the sky above Is nothing to you the person who gives me love.

Everyone 22-Dec-03/3:53 PM
You can't legislate desire; it has to come from within. Having said that, your use of "glee" to rhyme with "see" and "love" to rhyme with "above" is quite possibly the most staggeringly important contribution to English literature since J.R.Hartley's discovery of the letter "p".




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