of a half-formed thought, just the uneven lines of every faked smile. This made me feel how aging is a complete waste of time if this is the case. Classy.

I was just thinking how much mine, yours and so many others poetry styles have changed since i discovered p/r. Still find a feast of ideas from you, p/r is one cruel mofu of a site but the fruits come with buds after a while.

Liked it, one reason i did was because it has at least 2 parts it can be ended with an impact. Loved the 1st 3 big time.

Despite what other people think about it, I thought it was filled with much coolness. - but it took me a while to get it, but somehow, I did and I love it! A 9!

you must come from Cornwall with a name like that. I think you are a true poet and i like your work

I LOVE IT!

haha! funny, no? I give it an 8, because i just thought that was hilarious!

Excellent title. This could have been quite tedious but your a wordsmith meister and i have to say mr intransit....this is one of your best. (in my op) 10 deserves hits.

not sure about the begining but the rest festoons like tinsel. The beginning seems clumsy and i think i'm being cruel to mr potato head because that dude don't belong in a poem. I'm warming to him. 8

Something for a nothing in everyones' nowhere. Brilliant. Small nits. I would make the leaves and wind whos, they are accompanyment to the man. I don't like the duplicitous rain, unless it has specific meaning, explain? (Crib)is slang for house in America find something else please. I'm totally lost with the crownings. Sorry. "Jettison of the richer man" also brilliant. And I liked the use of mackintosh. I don't mind going to the dictionary at all. Even for this small stuff, the gross of it is velly goot, yah.

Did this start as an actual Mad libs thing ? Kudos for taking something you might usually see kids playing with and giving it a try in the adult world. I think it actually works. Maybe it's no Picasso, but it certainly entertains. Kudos for the risk factor.

Whew. I thought I was the only buffon here. ha! Needs tweaks. Verbalize with volume and you'll find them. high nines.

Simple. Simple is good. jsp?id=67469-Trapped in a horseshoe.

You can't keep hiding for the rest of your life.

And still I search for it, I must be one of those fools they call human.

I like it, a well written poem, But Seraphic and manic don't seem to fit.

Been there, stupidity is pervasive when alcohol is involved. Be more specific, discribe the scene, Mangled metal and broken glass, A pool of blood, A life gone in a flash. Screaming sirens pierce the air, Broken dreams scattered here and there. I'm not a poet, but something like that.

You go girlfriend you just may be the next Emily Dickinson!

J-lo doesn't have anything on you suga!

Tell them all about it honey!