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The Vagabond (Free verse) by Caducus
A white man with black fingers
Played a 5 string guitar in his strip lit subway.
When the pavements were quiet
He sang for himself.
Accompanied by a whistling wind and curled leaves,
Which sang for him in exclusive echoes,
Something for a nothing in everyoneâs nowhere.
Queens and lions were crowned
Shining on the lining of his tweed flat cap,
Jettison of the richer man
To buy himself a yield to conscience,
Given to the poorer man
Who only has time in abundance
Who wears the elements on his face,
Sun
Rain
Snow
Wind
And rain.
As he walks to find his cardboard crib;
The rain silvers his street
Glittering his dead manâs mackintosh
Making an unseen shadow shine,
Beneath the urban gold of lampposts.
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.6666665
Weighted score: 5.717177
Overall Rank: 1915
Posted: December 30, 2003 11:50 AM PST; Last modified: December 30, 2003 11:50 AM PST
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whos, they are accompanyment to the man. I don't like the duplicitous rain, unless it has specific meaning, explain? (Crib)is slang for house in America find something else please. I'm totally lost with the crownings. Sorry. "Jettison of the richer man" also brilliant. And I liked the use of mackintosh. I don't mind going to the dictionary at all. Even for this small stuff, the gross of it is velly goot, yah.