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Until I see you again (Free verse) by singinkygal Why won't you get out of my head
stop haunting my dreams
get out of my mind
oh it seems
I can't concentrate
and I just can't wait until I see you again
Wishing fantasy were reality
and dreams would come true
seems all of my mentality
is focused on you
and I just can't wait until I see you again
Watching the clock
wishing time away
counting the hours
until the day
that I get to see you again
Down the ladder:
For her.
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Posted: December 28, 2003 5:36 PM PST; Last modified: December 28, 2003 5:36 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.1986713 Overall Rank: 4569 The following users have marked this poem on their favorites list:
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Christof @ 217.44.71.71
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29-Dec-03/8:24 AM
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Is this a pop song? It's got a nice rhythm, but it doesn't say anything new, or in a new way.
You go girlfriend you just may be the next Emily Dickinson!
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