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Until I see you again (Free verse) by singinkygal

Why won't you get out of my head stop haunting my dreams get out of my mind oh it seems I can't concentrate and I just can't wait until I see you again Wishing fantasy were reality and dreams would come true seems all of my mentality is focused on you and I just can't wait until I see you again Watching the clock wishing time away counting the hours until the day that I get to see you again

Christof 29-Dec-03/8:24 AM
Is this a pop song? It's got a nice rhythm, but it doesn't say anything new, or in a new way.




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