And I felt good about the 10 you gave me, rockmage, until I started counting all the 10s you've given other people recently. What do you do when a poem is not say-nothing fluff like this? Do you have an 11 in reserve?

You win the coveted 'Golden Spiral-bound Notebook' for the day if CLS/Lydia-Evelyn and Princess Snowflake don't post. It comes with a purple wobble pen.

The title needs changing. Possibly just to 'The Blossom Tree'? Just a suggestion. Notice I'm still giving you a ten.

As of now, i change my poem to a free verse.

I agree with zodiac except I don't mind "they were a sunlight". It made me pause and consider the last line more deeply. If you want to demarcate "Water" set it off with a colon or by giving it its own line. Hmm, just a thought, what about "disguising themselves as sunlight" or posing as sunlight, or something along those lines?

This goes in the hall of shame! Its one of the worst poems EVER! HAHA oh well! :)

BTW, this has nothing to do with my poem, but please do a search on your computer for Henry Vaugn or someting like Vaughn and read the 1st part of his poem "The World". BTW Mr. Vaughn is an old poet. Tell me what you think! Thanks!

This one is kinda...why did you write it? (What was your "inspiration"?)

MOST enjoyable. Is "I'll be the seed that's threshed in that fiery immortal catechesis" a metaphor for posting on pomeranker? That line's the only one that bugs me, because I'm not really sure what you mean by the fiery immortal catechesis. st.2 l.4 I think it should it be I look across TO where or I look across the aisle and see or something. In any case, what you look across isn't what you're looking at. How's THAT for a nitpick, lol.

Loved it. Made me think. Its one of those poems that makes you read it again.

I liked it. Im no proffesional critic or poet. but i liked it.

Interesting. Just a suggestion, when you get PMS, do something fun, instead of something that makes you realize how horrible you feel. Good Job, though.

Why do i not see any 4 or 0's? This poem sucks!

I am the authour

I have a ? for all you. How exactly do you rank aa poem? Is it by how much you like it or by how good it is?

LIked it. You must like water. I prefer pop or beer or chocolate milk or somethin. BTW, rockmage, do give everything a 10? Just wondering. Good job. ill say...7.

Huh. Well...ill give it a five. Good, could be better, but good.

Um... haha.

You wrote a good one. It describes all about teen-dating and break-ups. Way2Go!

Bravo! Bravo! You're so good at this. :-)