god'swife
on The Hermit by sykes
28 Jan 2004, 10:48 PM
You really need to catch up on your reading. This is old hat.
The last line is as useless as tits on a nun. Otherwise I liked it. 7
You're getting it. One part of this is making me think really hard. For that, a 9.
My computer doesn't have spell-check
Poetry doesn't need punctuation, peotry has no rules, so how can you say she broke the non-existant rules of poetry?
I concur. Well put, Goed.
This is great....i dont use punctuation...capitols, proper use of speech... or grammar either and everyone seems to hate me for it....and to me your stuff is great and i understand it...so keep doing it the way YOU like it theres no problem with it and everyone that has a problem with mis use of words and punctuatin should just kiss our no exclamation asses
I hate those sick bastards! 7
"A Murder of Crows" is already a Cuba Gooding Jr. movie, but then you knew that. This would be a lot stronger (that's all I'm saying) if you thought of something else for that line.
nice stuff, keep it up
i really love this poem...very good
love it your really good....i wish i was this good.... anyway, i gave you a big fat 9.
need to fix a few things.
then in that case I was ahead of myself....it was written when I was 14 in Chem class.....board meetings were 10 years away.....
Too short did't quite catch the drift.
This is great, i can see the symbolism and the social relevance of the poem if we would dig deeper from it's content. It's true we're deaf, blind and dumb somehow living in this universe.
The rhymes and the meters does'nt quite go smoothly.
I too have a murder.
http://www.poemranker.com/poem-details.j
I will ransom them from the power of the grave; I will redeem them from death.
Where, O Death, are your plagues? Where O grave is your destruction?
Hosea 13:14
your intentions are the highest, but your poetry unfortunately is lacking. More righteousness, less prettiness. Go for the jugular. That's what Jesus did.
Mighty damn good.