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Blood on the Sidewalk (Lyric) by Red Optimist
Watch as your followers die Have you no remorse for your lies Worship your king he was sent by the gods Only the aristocrats live like hogs Get in the bunker boys Can you hear that noise? It sounds like a murder No one could hear her As she screamed for her life Her neck was slit by a Knife The commune must be destroyed The federal government seems annoyed Take our tribute we did not do our job The regime was better then this mob Get in the bunker boys Can you hear that noise? It sounds like a murder No one could hear her As she screamed for her life Her neck was slit by a Knife The invaders are coming again So get out all the available men It is time to go and fight Let us show them our might Get in the bunker boys Can you hear that noise? It sounds like a murder No one could hear her As she screamed for her life Her neck was slit by a Knife

Up the ladder: Diary
Down the ladder: Bird (Yang)

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.7777777
Weighted score: 6.388889
Overall Rank: 803
Posted: January 28, 2004 5:26 PM PST; Last modified: January 28, 2004 5:26 PM PST
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[10] Miggy @ 208.59.134.37 | 28-Jan-04/5:47 PM | Reply
nice stuff, keep it up
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