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on Eat It While It's Hot by Shardik
22 Feb 2004, 5:52 PM
There a lot of women out there that assume this is about them? It's not, it's about homosexuality.
Dull
Indeed, remember when the kept asking Michael J. Fox what was with the life jacket in back to the future, and when the Navy would be setting sail! Yay. But one must ask if a chicken breast was wearing a vest would that said breast be a lesbian turkey tit imposter?
It's rare that I would have something in common with a being of your obvious and rare talent, but at least we have your confusion in common, and that's a tasteful start to a dreadfully dull penning if ever.
You spelled 'Cream' "Dream" for one.
And 'Monkey Fluff', "foilage", but I thought that was brilliant.
Sides? Who's choosing??
Cat Fight!!
Some good language in this.
Slightly left of center myself.
This is dead on! 10
This shit is so yesterday.
Candy Man
Candy Man
Candy Man
Candy Man x3
This is starting to freak me out.
You have perfectly related the truly pathetic nature of your spot in the world. 10!
this is good
i like the style
A masterpiece from the "so incoherent it must be beautiful" school. -bow'ls-
Delightfully inquisitive! -0-
-10-
and i coiled off a 25 pounder
I must tell a truth, the first stanza is not mine, it was written by a friend of Rupert Brooke, describing him on the eve of WW1, so I cannot take credit for it. The rest is mine though, I thought I'd develop the original.
The best of the outhouse tales, I think (and a woman character, finally!) But when can we expect more AIDS?
Mirror shmirror. To, of course, should be too.
<Sigh...>