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Eat It While It's Hot (Free verse) by Shardik
What have I done to you sweet ego?
I have chased too much poetry,
and verse, I've rehearsed,
with Viggo Mortenson.
I've sinned, I've let my belly
out of the telly. I've Sonnets
of meat jelly, and Vilanelles
Of both Pastrami and Mannicotti,
but still I've the finger to not!
Eat much more, I might swig a whore.
Good, and quite sore, I'll implore you
to answer the phone more, while
I work on eating a bone, or
regurgitating a clone from some
B movie nostalgia kept loan, on
why I care enough about you.
Simmering away all morning,
and scorning my top button
popping off into the sun.
Oh, you round mutton
Oh, you crusty meatloaf
Lord, the Sea Bass is something,
and the Muscles with rice pilaf.
There are six kinds of salad
And a Mexican ballad, about
whether or not it's valid to
eat dessert when there's more...
To eat after dancing?
I should have brought a tape recorder
when I crossed the border.
A smart poet would know that it's
impossible to write that fast from
the soul with one elbow and a
mouthful of whole oysters and
Tequila with a bowl to rinse off
your fingers with lemons.
Weddings are for food.
The poets drink is fine
Let me not be rude
To the bride's maid that has pined,
away at my lap all day.
Tonight shall be candles,
and wet lips against
what rips up from behind
to remind the bee that
the flower's power
is in the worded line,
Then the poetry is mine.
Yes, and I can just unwind.
In time with another
coming Summer.
And the lovers,
With their preen.
I dream away
Of food and young lovers.
This is something
I do for the world.
This is something I do
To feel alive, and
remember you.
And how we were
together.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.8333335
Weighted score: 5.493059
Overall Rank: 2784
Posted: February 20, 2004 11:05 PM PST; Last modified: February 20, 2004 11:05 PM PST
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