titan69
on The Blood-Stained Body by Phalkon
13 May 2004, 1:57 PM
I like this simpell and good 8/10
Good thoughts.
I like gnarly.
I sink zat you vould be better usingg ze S for ze th sound at ze end off "youth"
Did you get copy-paste-happy? Did you get a siezure and hit ctrl-c and then ctrl-v repeatedly?
-no vote-
Bow'ls
bad ascii art is forbidden.
I thought the poem was good up until the last stanza...I guess its just because I have a different outlook on life.
Not too bad, but you may want to consider changing this to a lyric and adding a chorus or something. Just a thought...
makes perfect sence to me.8/10
What's the world coming to when even God can't look at internet porn?
I think im going to cut my throut after reading that
Jason Biggs?
I had a dog just like that Miss him though?
I love it! ~Perfect ten~
The first line was almost worth reading once. Probably could be a good poem if you were willing to write it.Or able for that matter.
Sucks to be you. You know. Dead and all.
I think we look for God in Poetry. Not you though... obviously.
sliver
on Who are the best poets on poemranker? (A list by me) by Jeremi B. Handrinos
13 May 2004, 4:47 PM
Well, I guess I missed all this, But I see I made your list.I can't type fast so I will just say gracias.
Hey you, I've been on a sabbatical, but I saw that I've been put on your "Favorites" list. Thank you for that. So, how ya been sweetie? good poem here way the by, of curse another ten.