-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
on some deleted poem
13 May 2004, 5:07 PM
Would it be wrong if two Christians accidentally had sex before marriage? For instance, suppose the woman is lying nude on her bed, alone, and praying, and the man is in a room directly above, nude, lying face down on the floor with a harness around him and a bungee attached to his back. And then the floor boards give way and the man falls onto the woman repeatedly (because of the bungee) and the woman can't move because she is in the middle of a prayer and hasn't said "Amen" yet. Moreover, whilst the incident is totally out of their control, they still obtain sexual pleasure from the encounter because they can't help their natural instincts. Would that be wrong? Hmm?
Crow In a Stagnant Pond by Frivilous Mediocrity
Oh crow in the mire!
Why won't you float nigger
Oh Black bird in quick sand
If you weren't so black
I'd lend a hand.
<{Baba^Yaga}>
on Who are the best poets on poemranker? (A list by me) by Jeremi B. Handrinos
13 May 2004, 5:22 PM
Actually Sliffer, everything after the top 10 don't 'really' matter.
actually I think I'll voat
Here's a 5 as a gift from me to you
AABB rhyme schemes hurt me and cause my forehead to slam the desk in siezure.
On this fine May day, I read this as it snows outside my window.These are the people I seek to find, When I pass I won't leave them behind.
Were you under orders? Huh were ya?
My poem 'All There' was written for my father on his birthday, also the 1 year anniversary of his death. I can feel your pain, well expressed.
Have I heard this before? Or parts of it?
I like the wet sock on the line analogy-hell I loved the whole first stanza, alot. The rest was o.k., but it didn't keep the grip that the first stanza had. Overall 8, but a good one. I visit my grandma in Douds Iowa, so I can relate to the humidity, the pit, etc.
Talk about cooling off in a creek on the way home . Perhaps another find? (Indian artifacts, etc.)
Maryland? So close to the capital, too.
My condolences.
Quality vill though.
Neruda you aren't
Okay okay. Since sliver will no doubt shove an iron rod up my rectum unless I comment on this one with a vote:
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-9-
because it makes me feel drunk..
Incidentally, I drink to make other people more interesting
For accuracy, 10. For myself,0
-blink-
concrete-I think
I feel your pain. If I ask my dog what's on a house,
She says a rooooof> she can talk too
Must be a drought,