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-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on some deleted poem 13 May 2004, 5:07 PM
Would it be wrong if two Christians accidentally had sex before marriage? For instance, suppose the woman is lying nude on her bed, alone, and praying, and the man is in a room directly above, nude, lying face down on the floor with a harness around him and a bungee attached to his back. And then the floor boards give way and the man falls onto the woman repeatedly (because of the bungee) and the woman can't move because she is in the middle of a prayer and hasn't said "Amen" yet. Moreover, whilst the incident is totally out of their control, they still obtain sexual pleasure from the encounter because they can't help their natural instincts. Would that be wrong? Hmm?
<{Baba^Yaga}> on Swan on Willow Lake by Caducus 13 May 2004, 5:18 PM
Crow In a Stagnant Pond by Frivilous Mediocrity Oh crow in the mire! Why won't you float nigger Oh Black bird in quick sand If you weren't so black I'd lend a hand.
Actually Sliffer, everything after the top 10 don't 'really' matter.
Sasha on some deleted poem 13 May 2004, 5:46 PM
actually I think I'll voat
Sasha on some deleted poem 13 May 2004, 5:46 PM
Here's a 5 as a gift from me to you
Sasha on Domingos by candaliesa 13 May 2004, 6:18 PM
AABB rhyme schemes hurt me and cause my forehead to slam the desk in siezure.
sliver on A Year Later (edited a bit) by Sasha 13 May 2004, 6:20 PM
On this fine May day, I read this as it snows outside my window.These are the people I seek to find, When I pass I won't leave them behind.
sliver on Random by <{Baba^Yaga}> 13 May 2004, 6:24 PM
Were you under orders? Huh were ya?
sliver on Domingos by candaliesa 13 May 2004, 6:34 PM
My poem 'All There' was written for my father on his birthday, also the 1 year anniversary of his death. I can feel your pain, well expressed.
Sasha on some deleted poem 13 May 2004, 6:37 PM
Have I heard this before? Or parts of it?
sliver on some deleted poem 13 May 2004, 6:42 PM
I like the wet sock on the line analogy-hell I loved the whole first stanza, alot. The rest was o.k., but it didn't keep the grip that the first stanza had. Overall 8, but a good one. I visit my grandma in Douds Iowa, so I can relate to the humidity, the pit, etc. Talk about cooling off in a creek on the way home . Perhaps another find? (Indian artifacts, etc.)
INTRANSIT on A Year Later (edited a bit) by Sasha 13 May 2004, 6:49 PM
Maryland? So close to the capital, too. My condolences. Quality vill though.
Neruda you aren't
Sasha on some deleted poem 13 May 2004, 6:53 PM
Okay okay. Since sliver will no doubt shove an iron rod up my rectum unless I comment on this one with a vote: ' -9- because it makes me feel drunk.. Incidentally, I drink to make other people more interesting
INTRANSIT on Random by <{Baba^Yaga}> 13 May 2004, 7:01 PM
For accuracy, 10. For myself,0
Sasha on Random by <{Baba^Yaga}> 13 May 2004, 7:15 PM
-blink-
Sasha on Tomorrow by Quarton 13 May 2004, 7:57 PM
The fog is a veil to hide our kisses....etc. Gag me
sliver on us by tatteredatlas 13 May 2004, 8:08 PM
concrete-I think
sliver on Speaking Dog by MacFrantic 13 May 2004, 8:10 PM
I feel your pain. If I ask my dog what's on a house, She says a rooooof> she can talk too
sliver on an ode to hypatia by francis nor capule 13 May 2004, 8:12 PM
Must be a drought,