i put this on my favorites list another 10

"empty words are spoken empty words are heard nothing ever matters not even a picture of a bird" i know exactly how you feel... i have a picture of a bird on my bedroom door and sometimes i'm so deep in blackness i just cover it with a damp tow'l and scream in silence. another 10

will you read some of my poems, thanks!

i have no clue

Some nice angles in there, I find myself wondering what's it all about? A feel good poem well made.

Like the other; lots of idea, lots of emotion - screaming for distilation and a single goal.

Interesting. Get rid of the "sort of..."; it's a sonnet. Anyone who argues that is lacking the expertise to be taken seriously. The [conjuction]: is a little distracting... what is it buying you for this cost?

Yeah,this is about a friend and what I wish would have happened when I told him I liked him.

Oh my!

too personal without any true depth. Just Emoting, and not even very strongly. Nice imagery but it feels like its coming from nowhere only to end up going nowhere. No suggestions, because I'm not really sure how you could make this better.

That is really good. It expresses emotion very well. It makes me glad that I am not the only person in this world to feel that way.

You missed a 'brown'. Otherwise this would have contained every single motif you've copied from -=Dark_Angel=- in the last 2 years.

Well said.

So, wha tis this revel ation? de pome wants to have it.

Very current.

A lot of butt in this one.

I've forgottn why this poem should bother me. It's something in my past or in my future but it isn't happening now. Maybe that's a good thing.

What?

A Shitaco with extra poonani 1!!!!

Hmm...