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Silencing the Silenced (Free verse) by seanlb1
shoot the arrow make me bleed kill me now unknowingly i see the shadow of a dripping wound light the darkness set the mood i don't want to die by your hands i don't want to see you last i don't need this dangerous outpour drowning in your barrage of letdowns die said the killing girl to the eyes crying blood a hand moved to the cheek and wiped it all away she said cry no more my love but the eyes just faded her eyes flowed in despair nevermore would his heart need mending i want to see the other life where crying is natural dying is natural secretly hiding what fears you the most you know you should tell fear of loss of a softness fear of loss of what matters distilling the tears in the heart never ending breaking that which breaks the easiest

Up the ladder: protest chant
Down the ladder: On Being Born

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.0
Weighted score: 5.2384057
Overall Rank: 4123
Posted: May 23, 2004 3:23 PM PDT; Last modified: May 23, 2004 3:23 PM PDT
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Comments:
[10] zodiac @ 65.161.41.48 | 24-May-04/4:21 AM | Reply
will you read some of my poems, thanks!
[n/a] seanlb1 @ 66.161.250.133 > zodiac | 9-Jun-04/9:32 AM | Reply
sorry i haven't been on here in a long time! yes i will gladly read some of your poems!
[8] Shuushin @ 147.154.235.53 | 24-May-04/8:50 AM | Reply
Like the other; lots of idea, lots of emotion - screaming for distilation and a single goal.
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