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Free verse № 103086

the greatest moment that never existed

Member since 2003 · Posted 23 May 2004 · 1 comment

Forget my past for just one hour Forget the hurt and abandon Forget that this can't be To breathe To live To be Say what you really want to say Say that no one will know Say you'll live for tonight, tonight Goodbye lover lost to being a memory Goodbye sweet forgotten moonbeam Goodbye time machine

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[9] Dan garcia-Black 24-May-04/7:54 PM Reply
I've forgottn why this poem should bother me. It's something in my past or in my future but it isn't happening now. Maybe that's a good thing.