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the greatest moment that never existed (Free verse) by thepinkbunnyofdoom Forget my past for just one hour
Forget the hurt and abandon
Forget that this can't be
To breathe
To live
To be
Say what you really want to say
Say that no one will know
Say you'll live for tonight, tonight
Goodbye lover lost to being a memory
Goodbye sweet forgotten moonbeam
Goodbye time machine
Up the ladder:
Dear God;
Down the ladder:
do androids dream?
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Posted: May 23, 2004 10:45 PM PDT; Last modified: May 23, 2004 10:45 PM PDTWeighted score: 6.905148 Overall Rank: 233 The following users have marked this poem on their favorites list:
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Dan garcia-Black @ 64.161.177.233
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24-May-04/7:54 PM
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I've forgottn why this poem should bother me. It's something in my past or in my future but it isn't happening now. Maybe that's a good thing.
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