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22-Aug-02/3:39 AM |
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rasp of gratitude-good stuff !
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22-Aug-02/3:57 AM |
Loved it, not sure about the day transpiring though ?
Didn't quite sound right-just nit picking, loved it.
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| Re: Jim Shady. by The troubled sinner |
22-Aug-02/4:09 AM |
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Yes its your hair, its in your eyes so you can't see to write properly
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| Re: Date Rape Gang Bang by Bachus |
22-Aug-02/5:47 AM |
So misogynist
Would you like to meet the girls ?
Yes means no you creep
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22-Aug-02/9:14 AM |
10/10.
I knew before I read your comments that you like Anne Sexton, I love her poetry. She was on the edge and you could sense it all the time in her writing, if you want to hear her read one of her best see :-
http://www.poets.org/poems/poems.cfm?prmID=1071
My favourite is " Just Once "
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| Re: Hunny by Venus |
22-Aug-02/9:31 AM |
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I liked this because it speaks the truth that no one dare speak. I disagree with Babbit our master poet, the ending was good, pulling it all together. Did you kill him ? I'm definitely up for the counter top, the floor, the bed with him sleeping through the whole thing as we get wet with those legs of yours wrapped round us both !
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| Re: Sunshine by alexander |
23-Aug-02/3:04 AM |
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| Re: untitled #2 by venusdemilo |
23-Aug-02/5:21 AM |
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| Re: la petite mort by poetekzen |
23-Aug-02/5:31 AM |
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| Re: Sleep Well by jriemerm |
23-Aug-02/5:33 AM |
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| Re: recent submissions by <~> |
23-Aug-02/5:40 AM |
Cos with this advice
you will not get any here
Understanding pah
1/10
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| Re: Painty by wlshepherd |
23-Aug-02/5:41 AM |
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You should patent it- 10/10
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24-Aug-02/3:25 AM |
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Nice vision oh mighty one
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24-Aug-02/3:25 AM |
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| Re: The box by Ming T. Merciless |
24-Aug-02/3:27 AM |
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| Re: One by ben |
25-Aug-02/4:27 AM |
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bacchus-thank you for your good wishes, they are much appreciated in this world of cynicism and easy virtue. God's wife, you have clear vision and if god ever gets tired of you, I will be here for you. I like your poetry too-Anne Sexton would be proud of you-my all time favourite.
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| Re: Ambiguous Love Poem For A Girl I Once Knew by poetandknowit |
26-Aug-02/4:50 AM |
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I enjoyed this immensely-9/10
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| Re: Hope by gianni |
26-Aug-02/4:51 AM |
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Why not warm surrender ? Ortherwise not bad- 7/10
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26-Aug-02/4:55 AM |
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Different and interesting, watch the typos though, they detract.
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| Re: Buried at Sea by brazen |
26-Aug-02/5:46 AM |
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