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Free verse № 11090

The box

Member since 2002 · Posted 24 Aug 2002 · Edited 24 Aug 2002 · 3 comments

Inhale, I am struggling in a thick dense mist, Somewhere in the Bermuda triangle. The lady of the lake beckons, the most freakish of artists. Dashed, My lowest point. Exhale.

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[n/a] god'swife 24-Aug-02/1:36 AM Reply
Bemuda?????
[8] alexander 24-Aug-02/3:27 AM Reply
It's good to breathe man
[7] ben 24-Aug-02/9:15 AM Reply
Bemuda schmuda god's wife get a life-interesting enough 7/10