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The box (Free verse) by Ming T. Merciless
Inhale, I am struggling in a thick dense mist, Somewhere in the Bermuda triangle. The lady of the lake beckons, the most freakish of artists. Dashed, My lowest point. Exhale.

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.857143
Weighted score: 4.6926384
Overall Rank: 12032
Posted: August 24, 2002 1:08 AM PDT; Last modified: August 24, 2002 3:30 AM PDT
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[n/a] god'swife @ 209.178.177.68 | 24-Aug-02/1:36 AM | Reply
Bemuda?????
[8] alexander @ 213.1.190.105 | 24-Aug-02/3:27 AM | Reply
It's good to breathe man
[7] ben @ 213.122.131.10 | 24-Aug-02/9:15 AM | Reply
Bemuda schmuda god's wife get a life-interesting enough 7/10
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