replying on Fate Sucks by Kitch
12 Jun 2003, 4:57 PM
I see, I hope you learn fast, and are willing to pay your dues unlike these other weekend poets. Because if you are serious about poetry, this is the place to be. There are some powerfully imaginative writers here, so we'll see, won't we.
on One Night Stand by Audaciouslilgrl
12 Jun 2003, 4:52 PM
Merely thrust (other) by whitebrother
Yo, it's merely the thrust from your bust
like lifting hefty bags of boobs up and over
the fence for another ride on the hippo
hungry, hungry, hungry, but
then I notice that you have
a penis too and the paper airplane
that was my erection slides
under the door and into the
closet of homosexual denial.
I cry tears of gayity knowing
I'll never have to hurl you
and your boobs over another
fence again.
Yo, it's merely the thrust from your bust
like lifting hefty bags of boobs up and over
the fence for another ride on the hippo
hungry, hungry, hungry, but
then I notice that you have
a penis too and the paper airplane
that was my erection slides
under the door and into the
closet of homosexual denial.
I cry tears of gayity knowing
I'll never have to hurl you
and your boobs over another
fence again.
on Advise by Audaciouslilgrl
12 Jun 2003, 4:33 PM
I really love your pointless use of colons, and your consistant confusing of 'than' for "then". Hey, when you get sick of being an idiot perhaps you could go back to just being you? Alas, you'd still be an idiot, but what the fuck, some sperm never swim straight out the gate, and some sperm just float on the backs of others, or in a proper face holster they are carried home to glory. GLORY! What were we talking about again? Ah, yeah, you blowing me for charity, whatta ya say, do your poor newbie friends a favor sacrafice yourself to -=Dark_Angel=- to appease the beast within, and save the future of bad poets on poemranker.
on So Simple by Audaciouslilgrl
12 Jun 2003, 4:25 PM
How about getting quartered by Clydesdales? Is that simple? If so... Play Polish roulette with a squirt gun full of beaver piss.
replying on The Gecko, and the Italian book collector by horus8
11 Jun 2003, 2:21 PM
I could teach you the art of poetry for a small fee. The fee would be your love draped over my broad Greek shoulders.
replying on The Gecko, and the Italian book collector by horus8
11 Jun 2003, 2:18 PM
So you are saying what? Start over, and try concentrating on specific subjects that do not include yourself. A book, a bird, a cafe, your period, your breasts, your beautiful pissed off pursed lips. Anything but self regret and suicide those feeling need to leak naturally into your work and not contaminate the entirety of the piece all at once. Do you have beautiful pursed lips by the way?={;}
replying on Jeremi B. Handrinos: Part 2 by wCUNTw
6 Jun 2003, 2:39 AM
Splendid, perhaps you should go read his poetry then.
replying on A Moment In Nowhere by Mr Pig
6 Jun 2003, 2:37 AM
Yes, you are.
replying on sorry, but i am lame by nolan
4 Jun 2003, 3:06 PM
That's a good question, looking back now, even I do not know.
replying on Iterated Fuck by nentwined
4 Jun 2003, 3:04 PM
You read it twice through correct?
replying on Iterated Fuck by nentwined
4 Jun 2003, 3:04 PM
My son was just dancing around the computer to this you sick bastards. lol.
replying on Baron Von Paranoia's lurid chap book by <{Baba^Yaga}>
4 Jun 2003, 12:07 PM
This poem has nothing to do with you, i hope.
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replying on Plastic Posies by BleedingRose
29 May 2003, 10:26 AM
Anytime, notice how much more effective those plastic posies worked? Amazing, I know, but it proves my theory about love and symbolism, and once I write that said theory down you'll see what I mean by that. Totally ironic and hilarious plastic posies, he he, who knew.
on Plastic Posies by BleedingRose
28 May 2003, 1:08 PM
tada
on At the end of the Day by -vz18-
28 May 2003, 11:01 AM
The word dissed was once, dismissed, try it.
on Feel My Fear by -vz18-
28 May 2003, 10:59 AM
It's rock hard, truly.
on I have the widest poemranker homepage by QUENDO
28 May 2003, 10:57 AM
Kraute
replying on Blush Of The Winter Rose by kassanna
27 May 2003, 12:56 PM
Ah, but if you'd've read your mythology you'd know what happened to the last crew that tried to turn me into fish food wouldn't you love muffin.
on Silent Hunger by kassanna
27 May 2003, 12:46 PM
Ha! Unless she's a fat cow dike with a glass eye.