Re: a comment on Fate Sucks by Kitch |
12-Jun-03/4:57 PM |
I see, I hope you learn fast, and are willing to pay your dues unlike these other weekend poets. Because if you are serious about poetry, this is the place to be. There are some powerfully imaginative writers here, so we'll see, won't we.
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Re: One Night Stand by Audaciouslilgrl |
12-Jun-03/4:52 PM |
Merely thrust (other) by whitebrother
Yo, it's merely the thrust from your bust
like lifting hefty bags of boobs up and over
the fence for another ride on the hippo
hungry, hungry, hungry, but
then I notice that you have
a penis too and the paper airplane
that was my erection slides
under the door and into the
closet of homosexual denial.
I cry tears of gayity knowing
I'll never have to hurl you
and your boobs over another
fence again.
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Re: Advise by Audaciouslilgrl |
12-Jun-03/4:33 PM |
I really love your pointless use of colons, and your consistant confusing of 'than' for "then". Hey, when you get sick of being an idiot perhaps you could go back to just being you? Alas, you'd still be an idiot, but what the fuck, some sperm never swim straight out the gate, and some sperm just float on the backs of others, or in a proper face holster they are carried home to glory. GLORY! What were we talking about again? Ah, yeah, you blowing me for charity, whatta ya say, do your poor newbie friends a favor sacrafice yourself to -=Dark_Angel=- to appease the beast within, and save the future of bad poets on poemranker.
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Re: So Simple by Audaciouslilgrl |
12-Jun-03/4:25 PM |
How about getting quartered by Clydesdales? Is that simple? If so... Play Polish roulette with a squirt gun full of beaver piss.
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Re: a comment on The Gecko, and the Italian book collector by horus8 |
11-Jun-03/2:21 PM |
I could teach you the art of poetry for a small fee. The fee would be your love draped over my broad Greek shoulders.
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Re: a comment on The Gecko, and the Italian book collector by horus8 |
11-Jun-03/2:18 PM |
So you are saying what? Start over, and try concentrating on specific subjects that do not include yourself. A book, a bird, a cafe, your period, your breasts, your beautiful pissed off pursed lips. Anything but self regret and suicide those feeling need to leak naturally into your work and not contaminate the entirety of the piece all at once. Do you have beautiful pursed lips by the way?={;}
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Re: a comment on Jeremi B. Handrinos: Part 2 by wCUNTw |
6-Jun-03/2:39 AM |
Splendid, perhaps you should go read his poetry then.
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Re: a comment on A Moment In Nowhere by Mr Pig |
6-Jun-03/2:37 AM |
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Re: a comment on sorry, but i am lame by nolan |
4-Jun-03/3:06 PM |
That's a good question, looking back now, even I do not know.
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Re: a comment on Iterated Fuck by nentwined |
4-Jun-03/3:04 PM |
You read it twice through correct?
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Re: a comment on Iterated Fuck by nentwined |
4-Jun-03/3:04 PM |
My son was just dancing around the computer to this you sick bastards. lol.
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Re: a comment on Baron Von Paranoia's lurid chap book by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
4-Jun-03/12:07 PM |
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Re: a comment on Plastic Posies by BleedingRose |
29-May-03/10:26 AM |
Anytime, notice how much more effective those plastic posies worked? Amazing, I know, but it proves my theory about love and symbolism, and once I write that said theory down you'll see what I mean by that. Totally ironic and hilarious plastic posies, he he, who knew.
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Re: Plastic Posies by BleedingRose |
28-May-03/1:08 PM |
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Re: At the end of the Day by -vz18- |
28-May-03/11:01 AM |
The word dissed was once, dismissed, try it.
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Re: Strong by -vz18- |
28-May-03/11:00 AM |
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Re: Feel My Fear by -vz18- |
28-May-03/10:59 AM |
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Re: I have the widest poemranker homepage by QUENDO |
28-May-03/10:57 AM |
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Re: a comment on Blush Of The Winter Rose by kassanna |
27-May-03/12:56 PM |
Ah, but if you'd've read your mythology you'd know what happened to the last crew that tried to turn me into fish food wouldn't you love muffin.
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Re: Silent Hunger by kassanna |
27-May-03/12:46 PM |
Ha! Unless she's a fat cow dike with a glass eye.
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