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Strong (Free verse) by -vz18-
I cried without you by my side I cried so much I thought I would die Your loved was so perfect, but never true You claimed you needed me, like I needed you When you said didn’t love me My heart broke in two You became my enemy I swore I hated you Though I was badly hurt I never let you see ‘Strong’ is how I wanted you to remember me

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.142857
Weighted score: 4.231596
Overall Rank: 13200
Posted: May 28, 2003 10:06 AM PDT; Last modified: May 28, 2003 10:06 AM PDT
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[6] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 | 28-May-03/11:00 AM | Reply
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