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Friends? (Haiku) by poodietat
When can we be friends? When you admit you fucked me And that you're sorry.
Up the ladder: Strong
Down the ladder: Poetry Proverb
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Arithmetic Mean: 2.142857
Weighted score: 4.231596
Overall Rank: 13206
Posted: June 8, 2005 1:46 AM PDT; Last modified: June 8, 2005 1:46 AM PDT
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[7] deleted user @ 81.69.23.196 | 8-Jun-05/6:05 AM | Reply
Given the restriction of the form you've done well. A haiku however is a view on Nature. Hm, well, fucking is quite Nature.
The first line is a bit odd. In meaning, that is.
[8] Bankrupt_Word_Clerk @ 69.231.17.200 | 8-Jun-05/2:58 PM | Reply
interesting take on friendship.
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