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Haiku № 126535

Friends?

by poodietat

Member since 2005 · Posted 8 Jun 2005 · 2 comments

When can we be friends? When you admit you fucked me And that you're sorry.

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[7] deleted user 8-Jun-05/6:05 AM Reply
Given the restriction of the form you've done well. A haiku however is a view on Nature. Hm, well, fucking is quite Nature.
The first line is a bit odd. In meaning, that is.
[8] Bankrupt_Word_Clerk 8-Jun-05/2:58 PM Reply
interesting take on friendship.