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Friends? (Haiku) by poodietat

When can we be friends? When you admit you fucked me And that you're sorry.

DoubleU 8-Jun-05/6:05 AM
Given the restriction of the form you've done well. A haiku however is a view on Nature. Hm, well, fucking is quite Nature.
The first line is a bit odd. In meaning, that is.




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