| Re: Phone Support: To Lee by http://mulberryfairy |
11-Jul-03/8:49 PM |
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One of the best poems I've read, today. 10! Funny & dramtic and that's not always easy to do. Welcome to poemranker, now I must go pray to penis for rent, Adieu.
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| Re: Is Not Chicago by http://findingwater |
11-Jul-03/8:43 PM |
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| Re: The Truth at Face Value by http://findingwater |
11-Jul-03/8:42 PM |
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| Re: a comment on I am talented & good looking damnit! by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
11-Jul-03/8:39 PM |
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| Re: When Jesus Found Me by http://mulberryfairy |
11-Jul-03/8:18 PM |
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| Re: Performer by http://mulberryfairy |
11-Jul-03/8:15 PM |
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| Re: a comment on TPBOD Joins a pack of wolves by Luzr |
10-Jul-03/8:12 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Dogma (Free herts) by Moose Farte by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
9-Jul-03/5:05 PM |
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I am handsome like a new Schwin beach cruiser with tassels.
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| Re: a comment on Freedom & Then some... by horus8 |
8-Jul-03/11:09 PM |
Listen again, two babys were thrown off of a bridge.
baby A) who's name is really Supreme knowledge Allah
baby B) who's name is really Sincere Understanding Allah,
are both thrown off of a 75 foot bridge by their mother.
A man swims out and is able to save Supreme Knowledge, but
Sincere Understanding either died on impact or sank and drowned.
Supreme Knowledged survived and so did the mother. Do you understand now. There is no riddle, it's just a fact. Supreme knowledge survived, that's a bad omen twinkle toes, or good depending on what side you are on.
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| Re: a comment on The obsessive compulsive sloth was a junkie by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
8-Jul-03/10:51 PM |
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Yes, I know, it's all very exciting, I was sitting down and all of a sudden... It came to me! Hepititis C and pepsi. WOW! I thought, that hasn't been done, but now, I've done it! DON'T YOU SEE!!!! I'VE RHYMED A SOFTDRINK WITH A HORRIBLE ILLNESS! I'm a poetic hero! I'm a fucking CRUSADER <horus starts singing lo da to vee lo dat toe lo da do ve do ta!> I win something, I know it, I don't know what, but I believe I've won something.
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| Re: a poet in the city by Bill Z Bub |
8-Jul-03/10:43 PM |
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Lol, a good way to show the kids how to compliment and still retain your own and aknowledge theirs without seeming, weak. Good one.
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| Re: Crashing Into Me by emeraldskies |
8-Jul-03/7:52 PM |
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This exposes too much, and you shouldn't because, well, good poetry use that concealment to its advantage, you give too much away here unfortunately. All of these aren't completely hopeless though, they can be reworked. You have to go for the knock out resolve. Read 12673 Jalepeno ave, by Jeremi B. Handrinos, to see what I mean.
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| Re: Beneath that Layer by emeraldskies |
8-Jul-03/7:43 PM |
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A man only chases the fruit he cannot have.
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| Re: A Little Cold Spot by emeraldskies |
8-Jul-03/7:42 PM |
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That could be chiseled more, but it's much better.
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| Re: vacation by geewhiz1962 |
7-Jul-03/3:51 PM |
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I do believe Judy left the room, perhaps she needs you to drive her home?
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| Re: a comment on I am talented & good looking damnit! by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
6-Jul-03/11:06 AM |
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It's coming, your video store will have them "celebration" and "character" have you seen "dancer in the dark"?
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| Re: lucid building peace by nolan |
6-Jul-03/11:00 AM |
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| Re: Ionic Winter by david |
4-Jul-03/1:57 PM |
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| Re: granite hearts by david |
4-Jul-03/1:55 PM |
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Yeah, you're a really good poet. Superb collection really.
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| Re: Night Letter to Yahweh by david |
4-Jul-03/1:54 PM |
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You're good. Have A HUT awarde. 10
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