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granite hearts (Free verse) by david
The benediction lasted
until nightfall. the
wolves, the deer, and
even the crickets
(God bless the crickets)
would lead their lives;
the sound of faucet-flow
from the mighty river echoed
liberally throughout.
(oh how that river flowed)
the night was no place or
time for us, us with
our metal eyes and
hearts of stone. we knew
too much; we knew not enough.
(how we strived to know)
lilies with petals like half-moons
reflected even a glimmer of love
and soul in that
benediction night, to even us
with our cold steel eyes, our
granite hearts.
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.5
Weighted score: 4.634471
Overall Rank: 12412
Posted: May 11, 2002 11:39 AM PDT; Last modified: May 11, 2002 11:39 AM PDT
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