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The Truth at Face Value (Free verse) by http://findingwater Wind
just blow,
and dive (into my soul afire).
Donât be wasteful;
skim the trees,
float the towering edifice
and splash my visage with a cold refresh.
let me feel you with a greedy, liars absorption.
Then leaveâor stay,
but for once,
just blow
wind.
Up the ladder:
The Girl for Me
Down the ladder:
Death Wish
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Posted: July 11, 2003 8:00 PM PDT; Last modified: July 11, 2003 8:00 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.345782 Overall Rank: 3411 Comments:
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http://mulberryfairy @ 216.195.144.27
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11-Jul-03/8:33 PM
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Sounds like an affair poem to me. For once, just (don't) break wind.
lol.
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