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The Truth at Face Value (Free verse) by http://findingwater

Wind just blow, and dive (into my soul afire). Don’t be wasteful; skim the trees, float the towering edifice and splash my visage with a cold refresh. let me feel you with a greedy, liars absorption. Then leave—or stay, but for once, just blow wind.

http://mulberryfairy 11-Jul-03/8:33 PM
Sounds like an affair poem to me. For once, just (don't) break wind.




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