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Beneath that Layer (Free verse) by emeraldskies Deep inside
A girl resides
All day
In every way
she hides.
She found you
Much too true
In her heart
There's still a part
a part of you.
Perhaps once
For what she hunts
Will be there
And he'll care
no more fronts.
So if you care,
Or if you dare
Approach the girl
Enter her world
beneath that layer
Up the ladder:
Friends?
Down the ladder:
Disappearing
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Posted: July 8, 2003 7:04 PM PDT; Last modified: July 8, 2003 7:04 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.8013287 Overall Rank: 11093 Comments:
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<{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154
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8-Jul-03/7:43 PM
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A man only chases the fruit he cannot have.
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