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Beneath that Layer (Free verse) by emeraldskies

Deep inside A girl resides All day In every way she hides. She found you Much too true In her heart There's still a part a part of you. Perhaps once For what she hunts Will be there And he'll care no more fronts. So if you care, Or if you dare Approach the girl Enter her world beneath that layer

<{Baba^Yaga}> 8-Jul-03/7:43 PM
A man only chases the fruit he cannot have.




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