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Disappearing (Free verse) by indiechic656
The mirror gleams, reflecting my young face;
One solitary tear courses its way
down my already damp cheek,
and drops into a growing pool between my crossed legs.
I close my eyes, and let the fantasy envelope me
Straw blond hair, clear blue eyes,
and skin like a porcelain doll.
I know this girl so well,
she may as well exist.
With a flash, I awaken,
take one longing glance into the glass.
She is not there, my fantasy self,
only a dream.
Shards of glass surround me,
as I, still clutching the plastic handle,
try, with all my might,
to disappear.
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.3333333
Weighted score: 4.8013287
Overall Rank: 11094
Posted: August 5, 2003 8:41 PM PDT; Last modified: August 5, 2003 8:41 PM PDT
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