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Disappearing (Free verse) by indiechic656
The mirror gleams, reflecting my young face; One solitary tear courses its way down my already damp cheek, and drops into a growing pool between my crossed legs. I close my eyes, and let the fantasy envelope me Straw blond hair, clear blue eyes, and skin like a porcelain doll. I know this girl so well, she may as well exist. With a flash, I awaken, take one longing glance into the glass. She is not there, my fantasy self, only a dream. Shards of glass surround me, as I, still clutching the plastic handle, try, with all my might, to disappear.

Up the ladder: Beneath that Layer
Down the ladder: A Best Friend Lost

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.3333333
Weighted score: 4.8013287
Overall Rank: 11094
Posted: August 5, 2003 8:41 PM PDT; Last modified: August 5, 2003 8:41 PM PDT
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[n/a] indiechic656 @ 68.111.213.38 | 5-Aug-03/8:43 PM | Reply
Tnis poem comes from a time in my life when I was less comfortable with who i am, and wanted with my entire being, to be like all my friends: to have blond hair, blue eyes, and milky white skin.
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