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Disappearing (Free verse) by indiechic656

The mirror gleams, reflecting my young face; One solitary tear courses its way down my already damp cheek, and drops into a growing pool between my crossed legs. I close my eyes, and let the fantasy envelope me Straw blond hair, clear blue eyes, and skin like a porcelain doll. I know this girl so well, she may as well exist. With a flash, I awaken, take one longing glance into the glass. She is not there, my fantasy self, only a dream. Shards of glass surround me, as I, still clutching the plastic handle, try, with all my might, to disappear.

indiechic656 5-Aug-03/8:43 PM
Tnis poem comes from a time in my life when I was less comfortable with who i am, and wanted with my entire being, to be like all my friends: to have blond hair, blue eyes, and milky white skin.




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