on Wasted Nation by DMonster
11 Jan 2004, 2:28 PM
lol, this is a rearing angry crack pipe in the face of crack!...?
on some deleted poem
11 Jan 2004, 3:26 PM
Spuna
on Last love poem by penguin fiend
20 Jan 2004, 7:36 PM
You've been writing for awhile, and this is what you've arrived at?
on The Cookies by Blindpoetry
20 Jan 2004, 7:37 PM
By the third stanza, I wanted to go back to the first one, and stay there. 4
on Cherry Blossoms (anti-haiku) by middenHeap
11 Jan 2004, 3:29 PM
Spuna.
on Forgive and regret by penguin fiend
20 Jan 2004, 7:56 PM
Now that was about as stimulating as watching a caterpillar take a shit on a leaf, but with less leaf and more...
on bimby by sneakerpimp
21 Jan 2004, 1:47 PM
It is most unkind of you to make me reach that far from my pot to find my teeth. Therefore, pack your things, you're fired from poetry. You are aware that your poem would have been much better if you'd have only repeated the word "Bermph" outloud indefinately.
on Our visions by penguin fiend
29 Jan 2004, 6:57 PM
No.
on What Was An Attempt Is Now Gone by Blindpoetry
29 Jan 2004, 6:58 PM
This is actually a better poem than your non-pimple poems. How'd you do that?
on Our visions by penguin fiend
29 Jan 2004, 7:09 PM
Your poems are about homosexual jews licking the chrome off of America.
on Duck - an ode by zodiac
5 Feb 2004, 4:59 PM
I'm sorry, but this hilarious, and really weird in a sort of a surreal dramatic way? huh... well, you certainly surprised me, I was wondering, I'm starting a publishing company, and I'd be interested in publishing your work, please e mail me for further information. horus8j@yahoo.com
Thankyou.
Thankyou.
on Necromancers Song (Incubus Guitar & Buddhist Drums) by SupremeDreamer
5 Feb 2004, 5:03 PM
also, you, I have a mission for you young one, e mail me at horus8j@yahoo.com
on A Panglossian Farmer by richa
5 Feb 2004, 5:04 PM
you are funny.
on The City (New Jerusaem) by blkarak
5 Feb 2004, 11:34 PM
It might work if you would have spelled fucking Jerusalem right.
on rather not high jump every 20 minutes, well maybe o.k. by A. Nomaly
5 Feb 2004, 11:37 PM
I'm listening to billy idol and curling my lip in la currently
on some deleted poem
19 Apr 2004, 8:26 PM
What if you are me, and I'm really you, and we are staring at each other through a metaphorical chunk of steaming dry ice? -=WHAT^WAS=-
on some deleted poem
19 Apr 2004, 8:27 PM
I would just like to add an 'EMPHASIS' to the word 'steaming' think of a goat turd at 20,000 feet, piping hot.
on Love, Fair by MacFrantic
27 Apr 2004, 11:44 AM
Crust.